ext_489835: (peteryan)
http://verbyna.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] verbyna.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] xstarlesscity 2011-06-15 11:52 am (UTC)

Here on jedusaur's rec, and she's right, this IS great. You played with the concept so well! And the pining, glorious, glorious pining, balanced out by that understated last line. Loved it!
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