omg i am actually weak in the joints myself just from reading this HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO GO TO CLASS NOW
both versions are amazing, especially in contrast to each other, and all your descriptions of how sonny feels as this is happening are so realistic and creative- like him actually wanting to be punished in public, because he's hit the point where he's so turned on that it kind of feels like the people there are props for his ~public humiliation scene and not like, his friends who he has to hang out with for the rest of the tour. he's too focused on the blood rushing to his own head (and cock) that it doesn't feel real, and he has to really focus on not going too far- that's so perfect.
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Re: FILL 2/2
Date: 2011-04-28 12:45 pm (UTC)both versions are amazing, especially in contrast to each other, and all your descriptions of how sonny feels as this is happening are so realistic and creative- like him actually wanting to be punished in public, because he's hit the point where he's so turned on that it kind of feels like the people there are props for his ~public humiliation scene and not like, his friends who he has to hang out with for the rest of the tour. he's too focused on the blood rushing to his own head (and cock) that it doesn't feel real, and he has to really focus on not going too far- that's so perfect.
also hnnng.